So here is what I'd like-some comments! Not the kind of comments that are genre-specific, meaning no "I hate sci-fi/this is horrid" type of stuff, but thoughtful literary critique. Conventions-not so much. I do not get along with this computer, and for the love of God and all things holy I cannot get it to do things that I'd like, such as italicize, fix things after the fact, etc.....
Suggestions for you, dear reader...
Does the story line make sense? All parts there? Fluid? Does it make sense? Where are there jumps in logic?
Is the motivation obvious behind the character's action?
Is the dialogue realistic? Would someone really say it?
Too wordy? Not wordy enough?
....things along this line. Whether it's your cup of tea or not, I know from grading an extraordinary amount of papers that one does not need to appreciate the topic to edit the craft. I need to hone the craft. And I need help doing it.
Cheers!
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